Sunday, April 06, 2008

another variation


sneph said...

i like this one!

the red bleeding paint marks

Lok said...

alan - i like this last one but also the one before this and the first one you put up. what i like about those is the flatness combine into a spatial thing. i would perhaps move the bottom girl to the left so that you get this kind of S curve from title to cross to middle woman to girl on the bottom. looks like a fun movie.

Alan said...

Thanks Steph.

Lok, Thanks dude, appreciate the crits, still waiting on my bro to choose which one he wants and then I'll make final corrections.