alan - i like this last one but also the one before this and the first one you put up. what i like about those is the flatness combine into a spatial thing. i would perhaps move the bottom girl to the left so that you get this kind of S curve from title to cross to middle woman to girl on the bottom. looks like a fun movie.
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i like this one!
the red bleeding paint marks
alan - i like this last one but also the one before this and the first one you put up. what i like about those is the flatness combine into a spatial thing. i would perhaps move the bottom girl to the left so that you get this kind of S curve from title to cross to middle woman to girl on the bottom. looks like a fun movie.
Thanks Steph.
Lok, Thanks dude, appreciate the crits, still waiting on my bro to choose which one he wants and then I'll make final corrections.
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